You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit?

Many individuals love to make a
trip
to new nations or districts. I for one like voyaging, and in the event that I get the opportunity to travel abroad for about fourteen days, I might want to
visit
a foreign country Australia. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will give some reasons to support my choice. There are numerous of reasons for selecting Australia to travel for the fourteen days.
Firstly
, my cousin who is currently
studding
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
in Melbourne. She already described the beauty of the country and I am very much excited to
visit
some universities for my own
further
studies.
Further
, I have always dreamed visiting Sydney Opera house which is famous worldwide. I remember, my aunt visited Australia
last
year and she was very excited for the
trip
and she would surely
visit
there
of them or themselves
their
second
time if she got a chance. She said she was very impressed by the beautiful and tall buildings and monuments. In the
next
step of
this
trip
I go to the some beautiful natural environments of Australia. There are many jungles, rivers, mountains and other beautiful places for tourists. In the
first
I will go to the Tasmania’s jungles, to
visit
wonderful trees and animals, in these jungles I can go to the river and swim or go to the nice mountain for
see
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seeing
a great vision of these natural environments. In near to the Tasmania, I will
visit
some protected lands,
for
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to
go to some surprising places,
such
as caves and valleys. In all
part
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parts
of
this
trip
, I have
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to talk with new people and learn about their cultural rules, as maybe in the
future I
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future, I
migrate to the Australia for study and live,
this
is an important point for me to ready
for
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to
live in Australia. All in all,
this
is a great opportunity to
visit
a foreign country I will choose Australia for several reasons which I described in the above paragraphs,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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