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You have just finished a trip booked through a travel agency but you are not satisfied with it. Write a letter to the travel agent. In your letter you should say Why u felt so unhappy What happened Make some recommendations about what travel agent should do about it.

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Dear sir, I am writing to complain about the star cruise I recently went on with your company. I
traveled
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 Victoria 203from 3rd to the 17th April and I was shocked by the standard of food and accommodation offered on the cruise.
To begin
 with, I was disgusted by the size and the condition of the cabin. It was very small and dirty unlike the large deluxe cabin that your advertisement promises. What is more, there was no private bathroom in the cabin. I was appalled to find that I had to share bathe with several other passengers, in spite of the fact that I specifically requested a private bathroom when I booked the trip. I feel I am entitled to a full refund for the cost of the cruise and a written apology for the misinformation contained in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding
this
 matter as soon as possible. Yours faithfully John wick
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