Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The developing tech and wide use of

internet

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the internet

is being used

to be connect

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to connect

with other peoples which improve communication and connection between them. I strongly agree, and would like to give my view on it. To start with, new tech have widely

improve

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improved

every ones life. Before any of

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these

developments were

found it

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found, it

was really hard to connect with

some

a human being

someone

one

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who were really far from their loved ones and it would have even cost a lot to just even send a

latter

a written message addressed to a person or organization

letter

and to make a call. But, with improved

development we

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development, we

can talk to

any

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anyone, no

anyone no

one

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no matter even if they are on another part of the planet. It

help

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helps

peoples

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people

to be in touch with each other.

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Secondly

, we can email or send

message

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a message

messages

any

any person

anyone

one

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in a

blick

a solid piece of something (usually having flat rectangular sides)

block

which make work so easy not only that with

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improved

technology we

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technology, we

are able to read

news papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

or see

anynew

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any new

channels of any part of the

plannet

(astronomy) any of the nine large celestial bodies in the solar system that revolve around the sun and shine by reflected light; Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto in order of their proximity to the sun; viewed from the constellation Hercules, all the planets rotate around the sun in a counterclockwise direction

planet

plant

planned

without any trouble. Which help peoples to keep them self up-to-date with world economy and how

economy

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the economy

economies

behave.

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one

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can read Time of

Indai

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

while they are in Dubai and keep them aware of what is happening in the county and how is share market doing.

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, many

peoples

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people

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also have

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has also had

stage fear in

such

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socail

relating to human society and its members

social

media

plays

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play

a major role, for

insatance

an occurrence of something

instance

youtube

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YouTube

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skype

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Skype

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twitter etc. Many peoples are

angged

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this

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activity to communicate with

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

peoples and which attract

wide varity

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a wide variety

wide variety

of peoples. To summarize, there might be

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a few people

few people

who

wont

will not

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want

agree with

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statment

a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc

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but

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in a nutshell,

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believe that it

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has

more pros

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cons and with

right use

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the right use

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technology it can improve many peoples

life

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lives

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Topic Vocabulary:

instantaneous communication
geographical barriers
sense of community
efficiency
quick responses
frequent interactions
maintenance of relationships
over-reliance
face-to-face interactions
superficial connections
immediacy
non-verbal cues
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Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same tv programs as their friends. Should Parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your experience.

Some think they can use as much fresh water as they want, but others say governments should limit water use because it is not endless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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