You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter Ask about the school Say what kind of accommodation you want Mention any special request you have (for example diet).
To whom may concern;
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am looking for a school overseas to study English
Add the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
I am writing you this
letter regarding some more information.
Firstly
, I would like to know when will the new semester take place and how can I enroll
Change the spelling
enrol
in
? I would be grateful If you could send me Change preposition
apply
a
application form. In Change the article
an
additional
, I Replace the word
addition
also
want to know how do I pay for the tution
fee? Is there any financial support for overseas Correct your spelling
tuition
student
?
Fix the agreement mistake
students
Secondly
, I also
need a
accommodation for my Correct article usage
apply
staying
. I do not mind sharing the room with other Change the form of the verb
stay
student
but it might be closed to the school. Fix the agreement mistake
students
Other
requirement is that Change the wording
Another
place
should have kitchen facilities because I suppose to cook by myself and other things Correct article usage
the place
such
as washing machine, internet, bathroom with working
shower, etc just for my basic need.
Add an article
a working
Finally
, since I come to an overseas country only to study by myself, so it would be great If you could introduce me to some communities groups for Add an article
a newcomer
newcomer
like me. That would help me a lot to adapt Fix the agreement mistake
newcomers
with
my new life.
You can contact me at Change preposition
to
anytime
via Replace the word
any time
this
email or my mobile number at 0123456789.
I am look
forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Nhat VuChange the verb form
am looking
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
