The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. you should write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

you should write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the process of
domestic
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the domestic
a domestic
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central heating system
by
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apply
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utilizing cold
water
.
Firstly
, the cold
water
enters the house through
entry
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outlet and
stored
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is stored
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in a
water
tank, located on the roof.
Also
, when
this
tank overflows, the
water
is drained to a storage tank for conserving it for
further
process
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.
Then
, the liquid flows down
in
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into
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the boiler on the ground floor, which utilizes gas or oil as fuel to boil the
water
and
to
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raise the temperature of the fluid.
Also
,
this
hot
water
is supplied to the radiators which are located in different rooms to generate
heat
and taps for domestic use.
Furthermore
, the radiators have small tubes that after giving
heat
cools
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cool
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down the
water
.
Then
,
this
water
is carried back to the boiler by the use of the pump and the boiler
heat
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heats
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up the
water
and
supply
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supplies
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it
to
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all over the house.
Overall
, the
heat
is generated in
house
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the house
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by using
the
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apply
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cold
water
and the process is called a domestic central heating system.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, heat with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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