The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. you should write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the process of
domestic
central heating system Add an article
the domestic
a domestic
by
utilizing cold Change preposition
apply
water
.
Firstly
, the cold water
enters the house through entry
outlet and Correct article usage
the entry
stored
in a Add a missing verb
is stored
water
tank, located on the roof. Also
, when this
tank overflows, the water
is drained to a storage tank for conserving it for further
process
. Replace the word
processing
Then
, the liquid flows down in
the boiler on the ground floor, which utilizes gas or oil as fuel to boil the Change preposition
into
water
and to
raise the temperature of the fluid. Fix the infinitive
apply
Also
, this
hot water
is supplied to the radiators which are located in different rooms to generate heat
and taps for domestic use.
Furthermore
, the radiators have small tubes that after giving heat
cools
down the Correct subject-verb agreement
cool
water
. Then
, this
water
is carried back to the boiler by the use of the pump and the boiler heat
up the Correct subject-verb agreement
heats
water
and supply
it Replace the word
supplies
to
all over the house.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the heat
is generated in house
by using Correct article usage
the house
the
cold Correct article usage
apply
water
and the process is called a domestic central heating system.Submitted by sandhusksm on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, heat with synonyms.
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