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When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person.

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Everyone has different experiences and opinions to notify
complaint
Suggestion
complainants
 about poor service or products. Some people might think that written
complaint
 is formal way to show our disappointment while some might think differently. To have faster and effective actions against my
complaint
, personally, I would prefer to complain about a product or poor service in
person
.
To begin
 with, I generally like to complain in
person
 to have a faster and necessary
steps
Suggestion
step
 for my issue related to any product or goods. When, writing a mail or
complaint
 letter, it will take long time to reach the correct
person
 and it will take even more
time to proceed the
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time to proceed with the
complaint
.
For instance
,
complaint
latter
a written message addressed to a person or organization
letter
 written to government for the broken road, broken
electricity
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electrical
 wire or any water related
issue
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issues
 at any home or at
public place
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a public place
public places
. To support my choice another reason is that while complaining to
person
Suggestion
the person
people
, the customer will receive
hand
Suggestion
a hand
 to hand action and they
also provides
Suggestion
also provide
 feedback in which customer can clearly mention the positive and negative points of products.
Moreover
, talking to
person
Suggestion
a person
people
the person
 a customer can see the body language and the gestures of the
person
 who is helping them and
then
 one can receive a proper explanation about the product.
For instance
, I had extra withdrawn from my bank account and I was not aware of that, after some time in passbook I saw that extra entry and complained to the manager of the bank. In that situation, he helped me and did proper investigation and gave my money back within one day. To summarize, above mentioned example and points shows that complained done face by done have effective and early result as
compare
Suggestion
compared
 to complained written via mail or letter.
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