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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend .

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A highly debated issue today relates to increased use of education sectors for computers and diverse set of new technology provided to their pupils replace the traditional that used books and printed materials
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 I am going to examine
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 question for both points of view and
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 give my own opinion on the matter. On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of Computers and tablets using considerably outweigh its disadvantages
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 The main reason for believing
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 is that easy to access to a multitude of information of books and assignments on
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the same screen
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 possible to say that devices have tools help to find specific information for any subject
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 One good illustration of
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Ebook
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an Ebook
the Ebook
 and pdf applications save my books in
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the same file
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the search tool
search tools
 to find exact data
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On the other hand
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 It is often argued that in
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fact, using
 of computers causes health problems
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 People often have
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 opinion that effect on sight ability of children and
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leads
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the future
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 point is that lab
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 and tablets using electricity to work and need charging. In
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conclusion, both
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however
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 I feel that computers and tablets most
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encouraging or approving or pleasing
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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