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Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In recent years,
technology
 has developed in all areas. So people are becoming addicted to the latest
technology
, especially children and youngsters. Some of those are
computer
, mobile phones, video games etc. The
development
 of
technology
 seems to be a boon for various fields
such
 as medical, research, launching satellites etc.
but
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But
 in some cases it is a bane which leads to the negative consequences. During previous years, the
technology
 was under
development
 and so the most of the children were not aware of that. So most of the
time
 they used to play with other children. They will involve themselves in various sports activities.
This
 helped them to strengthen their physical health and apart from
that
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that, this
this
 developed unity and coordination among them. Children learnt to adjust according to the situation and
also
 learnt to sacrifice for their friends. Nowadays, parents are engaged in their work and they don't have to look after their
child
.
Also they
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Also, they
 are not allowing their kids to play outside. To avoid their children going
outside they
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outside, they
 are engaging the kids with
computer
 and mobile games.
This
 restricts the children to involve in sports activities. Children are spending more
time
 by playing games
in
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on
computer
 or mobile. After a certain point of
time
 they are addicted to those games. They are not showing interest in outdoor sports.
This
 kind of
development
 affects the children's health both physically and mentally. These kind of games affects the
child
's eyesight and because of
this
, recently most of the kids are wearing glasses due to poor eyesight.
Also it
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Also, it
 distracts the
child
 from their studies and creates stress in their mind. According to my point of view, Children those who are spending
lot
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lots
 of
time
 playing with
computer
 games are spoiling their physical and mental health.
This
 is driven towards the negative
development
 of the
child
's future. So the parents must take care of their kids and encourage them to involve in sports activities.

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