Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future, while others think that it is a dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Today's we are living in techno-savvy world.
Human
makes robots which as purpose Suggestion
A human
The human
for
works as Suggestion
of
human
does. Few people are supporting robotics Suggestion
a human
workdone
, which they believe it will make Suggestion
work done
bright and prosparitical future
for Suggestion
a bright and prosparitical future
the bright and prosparitical future
next generation
.Suggestion
the next generation
However
, Some people says
, it could be worse effect on our cultural society, if we Suggestion
say
relay
on robots. I will discuss both views and give my opinion at the end of the essay.
To start up with developing side of have confidence or faith in
rely
future status
of robots, Suggestion
the future status
Firstly
, Robots are invented and assembled by scientist
Suggestion
scientists
the scientist
a scientist
,
the internal functioning Accept space
,
also
done by them. Intentionally, they believe robots can be replace human at every sections
. It's one time investment for robot installation at human Suggestion
section
place
Accept comma addition
place, then
then
after it's easy to maintain how it could be work
. Suggestion
workable
Furthermore
, employeer
do not require any surveillance to watch on their performance, it can be done at their home on program code software. a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
For Instance
, many restaurants keeps
robots as waiters, cooks and receptionist to attract people to visit their restaurant frequently. Customers are Suggestion
keep
facinated
to get service having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
vaccinated
by
a machine which seems perfectly a human. That's how Suggestion
from
employeer
wouldn't need to pay any kind of monthly salaries to any of a person or firm that employs workers
employers
employer
this
employees.
On the other sides, Some people plural of "this"
these
says
it's being Suggestion
say
controlling
by Suggestion
controlled
human
, but it's not a human, which means that Suggestion
humans
a human
makes
can't feel mercy over any accident or tragedy. an animal that produces gametes (spermatozoa) that can fertilize female gametes (ova)
males
Moreover
, If everyone replace
robots at Suggestion
replaces
human place
, Honestly, It will be brutal effect on Suggestion
the human place
unemployment rate
and it will be Suggestion
the unemployment rate
leads
to drop down country's GDP and economical growths. Suggestion
led
For example
, Recently, a scientist created a WAR robot who can replace a soldier at boarder security when it
was
on Suggestion
Was
testing field
to functional shoots few targets by gun, Suddenly, that robot straight up his gun point toward Suggestion
the testing field
training crew
and shoot him down, that person was Suggestion
the training crew
died
Suggestion
dying
at
the spot, it might have Suggestion
on
codeing
failure. That's why, it's act of writing in code or cipher
coding
prove
truth that Suggestion
proven
proving
proved
this
is an endangerous
object pose a threat to; present a danger to
endangering
in
our cultural society.
To sum up, Significant use of robots in Suggestion
of
this
world it might great technological advancement for future generation. Conséquence, it could be leads
to job loss and poor economic for any country, which effect on inflation and poverty of that particular country. I Suggestion
led
leading
lead
assertly
against that robots are developed in cultural society
.Suggestion
a cultural society
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