Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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of obsolete buildings

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the structures which built in the past are

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the people should protect and keep them

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today many people think they are unnecessary.And they should be destroyed.

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of them a new and modern buildings should be built.They are wrong.It is cultural property of the every country.

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these buildings are more important for the tourism industry.As a reason

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of tourists will interest to the history of these states.And they may want to watch the old and historical buildings.

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of the old ones is a wrong action.These kinds of buildings which build in the present are exist in many other countries.But the historical building which the same with other countries aren't exist.Because

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and they have own potential secrets. On the whole

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the old buildings are important parts of the countries.The people should protect them

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destroying.They should keep structures until future generation will know about them.All the reasons which I mentioned above are evidence of my perspective.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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