In many countries the proportion of older people is increasing. Could this have more Postive or negative effects on society?

In many states, the proportion of senior

citizens

is increasing.

Thus

,

this

can lead to many advantageous and disadvantageous sides. In my opinion, having a significantly older

population

will have negative effects sometime in the future. One serious

problem

that can arise from the rising

population

of older people is that the birth rates may fall, as many women nowadays are refusing to get married and have children,

instead

wishing to pursue their careers.

This

is a serious

problem

in Asian countries,

such

as South Korea, as women who were pressured to start a family are retaliating against the common typecasts.

Hence

, the senior

population

is broadening, and women are refusing to reproduce the new generation.

This

can have a negative outcome

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the childbirth rates. Another issue that isn’t talked about enough is probably the shortage of qualified workers in agencies. Since companies are keener on hiring younger people for jobs that require physical attractiveness and a fitness lifestyle,

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older people are put into retirement stipends.

That is

why senior

citizens

are having a hard time finding jobs in cities

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because they just don’t fit the criteria or standards that companies seem to have nowadays.

For example

, Japanese cities

such

as Osaka and Tokyo hold the highest record of having the oldest growing

population

, and no one seems to have a

problem

with the older

citizens

in offices. In conclusion,

although

having an older

population

can be tiring to have in workplaces, firing them shouldn’t be the only solution to

this

problem

. We should take the example of Eastern Asian countries and treat our senior

citizens

with love and care.