studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

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Most students struggle while making a choice between studying in their hometown or studying in another

city

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. Sometimes

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can be confusing for the student. Both the

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choices

have their own positives and negatives, which the essay will discuss. Studying university in another

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teaches people a lot,

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as how to cook, how to manage money etc. Absolutely can be more free than study in hometown. You will be more independent and grown. Acquired these personal skills will be helpful in future problems.

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these advantages, there are some disadvantages

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as friendship relations, cultural differences, accent of different

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, There are many advantages where studies in hometown. You don’t need to rent a house

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cook a meal and give the money to transportation in

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way you can save money.

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Also you

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can find

job

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a job

jobs

easily. You don’t have to adapt to own

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Although

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Despite

these advantages, there are some disadvantages.

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, you will still under your parents’ rules when you are staying with them and you cannot learn how to live single-independent of the family.

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there are financial advantages of studying in own

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study in another

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teaches the life, change

student’s future life

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a student’s future life

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you cannot learn other cultures where you are studying own

city

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. If you study in another

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, it will be enabled to learn other local people.

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Moreover you

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Moreover, you

will have

perfect experiences

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the perfect experiences

about

living different cities

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living in different cities

.As well as you can live some financial problems. In summary, both of the living methods of university students have some pros and cons.

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, students should select their living options cautiously to avoid or minimize the disadvantages

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

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Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

274 words

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studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and, you forgot to tell your friend that you couldnt attend.

Some people think that national news is very important and we should be up to date with national news. However, some says international news is more important as we should stay up to date with that. Discuss both and give your opinion

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

'People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities.' To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.