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The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
#consumption
The line graph illustrates the amount of three
kind
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kinds
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 of spreads (
margarine
, low fat
an
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and
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 reduced spreads and
butter
) which were consumed over the 26
years
 from 1981 to 2007. Units are
measure
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measured
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 in
grams
.
Overall
, the consumption of
margarine
 and
butter
were
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decreased over the given period,
while
 for low fat and reduced spreads it, rose. At the start of
period
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the period
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butter
 was the most famous product, which
replaced
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was replaced
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 by
margarine
 from 1991 to 2001, and following that
low fat
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low-fat
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 and reduced spreads were
most
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the most
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 common spreads in the
last
years
. In 1986
amount
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the amount
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 of
butter
 spreads consisted
about
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of about
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 160
grams
, after 5
years
butter
 crossed with
margarine
 which level showed 100
grams
 in 1991 and year by year
butter
 lost
own
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its own
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 state.
Likewise
, approximately 90
grams
 of
margarine
 was eaten in the first year after which
figure
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the figure
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 fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
 in 2007.
On the other hand
, the consumption of
low fat
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low-fat
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 and reduced spreads only started in 1996
from
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with
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 10
grams
 and was not
bas
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as
 popular as
margarine
 and
butter
 in
this
 period.
However
,
this
 figure reached a high
just
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of just
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 over 80
grams
 during the 5
years
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, years, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • spreads
  • increased
  • decreased
  • stable
  • significantly
  • approximately
  • per capita
  • remarkable
  • peaked
  • experienced
  • started
  • remained
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