Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Universities are educational places which should be as free as possible and have to give a chance for every student

equally no

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equally, no

matter where and how the people came there. It does not matter what age the student is, what socio-economical status they have or what

gender

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/ sexual

idendity

the distinct personality of an individual regarded as a persisting entity

identity

that the single person described himself/herself. Yet, I do not agree with the idea of universities should accept the equal number of two genders for each subject.

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off I think that different genders can have different areas of interests which means I do not agree with the

gender

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roles. But the escalation of the numbers of people between different departments somehow feels like an intervention to the rights of people. It does not have any kind of correlation between having a profession into a specific subject in terms of their biological

gender

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. It is enough to have the same degree of achievements to accept a student into a university. In Turkey there is a huge difference between engineering faculties in terms of numbers of different

gender

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students. Males mostly prefer to study that. Or psychology departments

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out abour the history about house or building they live in. What are reason for this? how can people research it?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?