Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Over the
last
half-century, public health
has become a major concern for people and the government. It is often argued the most suitable way to develop public well-being is by increasing the sports facilities. While others oppose this
view and they suppose that there are alternative measures that will be more effective.
Firstly
, increasing and expanding sports facilities one of the best solutions for improving public health
. The availability of gyms, basket hall, football ground, or other sports facilities in residential areas that will make a situation that anybody can do exercise
. Suggestion
the exercise
exercises
Consequently
, this
will affect some standards of people's health
. For instance
, before 3 years in our neighbourhood, there was no place for doing exercises and sports. Thus
, we spoke with the government to build a place that we can do our daily exercises, after one year they build parks include sports equipment. Therefore
, now I can see my brothers and my neighbours playing sports, and this
one example of improving public fitness.
On the other hand
, another group of people thinks that building more sports facilities would not be effective without health
education. Health
awareness would not only affect knowing the dangers of our lifestyle but also
on the understanding of the issue of health
problems. For example
, "The health
heroes" campaign in Abu Dhabi in 2016, was about giving children information about the importance of adopting a healthy lifestyle. In addition
, increasing the number of hospitals is more important than sports facilities. This
is because would reduce the crowdedness
lists in hospital.
To conclude, I support the latter view because health
education has real benefits more than increasing the number of sports facilities. Also
, the government should focus on the aim of creating a healthy society.Submitted by wulaaali on
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