Mobile phones are considered essential by most people nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones and state your opinion.

In recent years mobile devices

are increased

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increase

in usage from most community slices.

while

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While

misused of

this

device make some problems for the person.

this

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This

essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a

phone

with a few examples from my experiences. On the one

hand

, the main advantage of

mobile user

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the mobile user

mobile users

is contacting with friends and sibling, what I mean by

this

, people can access

easy

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easily

to

phone

and write

number

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the number

a number

or ID code to add a person to their

phone

.

For instance

, my sister living in the UK, she can call me directly through Viber application in

video call

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a video call

without the barrier of distance.

Furthermore

, mobile is a small device that can hold in a pocket,

also

easy to browse for getting information, to explain that, mobile can use for reading news and easy to hold by

hand

.

For example

,

last

week I

traveled

traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term

travelled

to the countryside with my

sisters I

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sisters, I

lost the road so I opened GPS on my

phone

then

getting the right way to my destination.

On the other

hand of

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hand, of

the argument, some problems could be

lie

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lying

in the misuses of mobile, to illustrate that, mobile can be broken easily by sliding from the user's

hand

to the ground especially touch screen is so sensitive and

expansive

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

part

in

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of

the mobile device.

Moreover

, in the

last

years, some articles and reports talked about mobile might cause cancer disease, that's to say, the nearest distance between

brain

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the brain

and

phone

can cause cancer disease by sending high waves to the brain,

in other words

, yesterday I read in the news an Italian millionaire got cancer disease in his brain cause he used mobile for calling

in

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after

hours. In conclusion, using mobile has many obvious pros like contact with people, getting information and easy to use.

However

, there are some cons for abused like losing a lot of money to buy new and

expansive

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

one.

personally

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Personally

, the upside of

mobile

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mobility

outweighs the downside.