The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve problem?

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A sad fact is that flights could have a lot of impact on the environment and

this

has been a major concern for many countries especially

developed

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developing

countries

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First

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we must think that flights have changed the traditions of ancient

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

Although

this

might pollute the environment or

ozon

a colorless gas (O3) soluble in alkalis and cold water; a strong oxidizing agent; can be produced by electric discharge in oxygen or by the action of ultraviolet radiation on oxygen in the stratosphere (where it acts as a screen for ultraviolet radiation)

ozone

layer but

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layer, but

made people to travel easier.

For example

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about 100 years age if people wanted to travel from one country to another, they should use animals

such

as horses and it could have taken some months to get to the destination.

second

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Second

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lets think we completely erase flights

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so what happens to

environment

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the environment

still

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Still

cars and factories are running.

are

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Are

the all pollutions from flights?I do not think decreasing flights either may not help the earth or may cause a lot of other problems and difficulties.Governments should not force the people not travel by plane because

this

can cause

high amount

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a high amount

of using cars that may be more polluted than planes. To conclude

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increasing tax on flights may decrease the number of people travelling by

airplane but

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aeroplane, but

aeroplane but

may

forcing

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force

them to use their own cars and

this

may cause more pollutions than flights.I

am completely disagree

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completely disagree

am completely disagreeing

have completely disagreed

with

this

idea and countries should find another way than increasing

tax

Suggestion

taxes

on the flights.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve problem?

Fully explain your ideas

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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this? (Write 250 words.)

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Write about the following topic. Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement