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The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights. To what extent do you think this could solve problem?

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A sad fact is that flights could have a lot of impact on the environment and
this
 has been a major concern for many countries especially
developed
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developing
 countries
.
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First
,
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we must think that flights have changed the traditions of ancient
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
Although
this
 might pollute the environment or
ozon
a colorless gas (O3) soluble in alkalis and cold water; a strong oxidizing agent; can be produced by electric discharge in oxygen or by the action of ultraviolet radiation on oxygen in the stratosphere (where it acts as a screen for ultraviolet radiation)
ozone
layer but
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layer, but
 made people to travel easier.
For example
,
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about 100 years age if people wanted to travel from one country to another, they should use animals
such
 as horses and it could have taken some months to get to the destination.
second
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Second
,
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lets think we completely erase flights
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so what happens to
environment
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the environment
?
still
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Still
 cars and factories are running.
are
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Are
 the all pollutions from flights?I do not think decreasing flights either may not help the earth or may cause a lot of other problems and difficulties.Governments should not force the people not travel by plane because
this
 can cause
high amount
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a high amount
 of using cars that may be more polluted than planes. To conclude
,
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increasing tax on flights may decrease the number of people travelling by
airplane but
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aeroplane, but
aeroplane but
 may
forcing
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force
 them to use their own cars and
this
 may cause more pollutions than flights.I
am completely disagree
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completely disagree
am completely disagreeing
have completely disagreed
 with
this
 idea and countries should find another way than increasing
tax
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taxes
 on the flights.
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