Some people think media should be allowed to publicize information on someone’s private life. Some others believe that media should be regulated in this regard. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and relevant examples.

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In the recent advance media era, the tiny activities of masses
offenly
in an open way
openly
shown
on
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in
mass media. It is believed by human beings that the press should
show
about personal
life
to the world, but others are opposite to
this
view. I personally stand by the latter viewpoint
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In my coming paragraphs, I shall discuss both points and give my own agreement. On private publicity side
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the personal experience of some mankind provide
source
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a source
of motivation to the other human beings and uplift various new skills among
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people.
For example
, if a person help the poor or needy people
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who are hardly meet their basic amenities
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then
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the masses
also
get inspiration to do something for them by getting information from
media
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the media
. So
,
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in
such
cases the media should personal
life
of people to the society.
Moreover
, there are multiple crimes
occur
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occurring
in the society to dwindle these situations the news channels can
show
the personal issues of the people to the whole world to erase the number of the criminals in the world. On turning to the confidential lifestyle side, the mankind
have
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has
right to enjoy their personal
life
.The personal
life
should be under the command of human beings.The media spread fake news about personal issues
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so it
give
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gives
dim light
to
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of
the social status of the human being. To illustrate, if the press
show
about domestic affairs of
particular family
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a particular family
the particular family
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then
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it may boom the chances of increase family problem
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So
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I believe that the media should not
show
any confidential issue to the society. Apart from
this
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everyone has right to enjoy their
life
in own style
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but, by catching single moments by
media
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the media
can destroy the celebration part of the
life
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I think
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the media should interfere in personal lifestyle of the people
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So
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the mankind can enjoy their
life
without any hesitation of revile any moment.
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