These days many children spend a lot of their time playing computer games but little time doing sports. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, the numbers of children spending their leisure playing

computer

games are increasing, while decreasing day for

sport

. In my opinion,

this

trend will have negative results in the future, and in

this

essay I will discuss about why and how it has occurred. Technology has considerably developed throughout

this

10 years, which brings about many new equipment,

for instance

,

computer

games, smart phones, and most important one, internet.

Additionally

the way children raised up is far more different from the past, which makes children have different lifestyles from our ages,

for example

, children can easily use

computer

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a computer

or smart phone with internet to connect with the people around the world, which can let them have many new friends and connections, so the children have more pleasure by playing

computer

instead

of doing something else,

moreover

, they can do variety of entertainment on the internet: reading free novels, establishing community, watching movies, even playing e-

sport

can be done. Eventually, they would not want to do what they think might bore,

for instance

, doing fun.

However

,

this

trend of increasing playing

computer

for children's free day might be a negative for development. It is true that playing

computer

has many benefits, but

also

, there are drawbacks. Sit-in the same position for a long period of time may cause you some fitness problems, specifically, backache, or office syndrome.

Furthermore when

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Furthermore, when

used

computer they

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computer, they

have to stare at

computer screen

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the computer screen

a computer screen

which can cause eye problem,

in particular

, myopia.

In contrast

, doing

sport

can be many benefits over just playing

computer

not only for health issue, but

also

real-life interaction with people. In conclusion, I think both playing

computer

and doing

sport

has both benefits and drawbacks. Children should balance their time to spend on playing

computer

and doing

sport

, in spite of just playing

computer

, which can cause many health problems.

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Furthermore, playing

sport

may beneficial to their health, and eventually, their real-life interaction.