These days many children spend a lot of their time playing computer games but little time doing sports. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, the numbers of children spending their leisure playing
computer
games are increasing, while decreasing day for sport
. In my opinion, this
trend will have negative results in the future, and in this
essay I will discuss about why and how it has occurred.
Technology has considerably developed throughout this
10 years, which brings about many new equipment, for instance
, computer
games, smart phones, and most important one, internet. Additionally
the way children raised up is far more different from the past, which makes children have different lifestyles from our ages, for example
, children can easily use computer
or smart phone with internet to connect with the people around the world, which can let them have many new friends and connections, so the children have more pleasure by playing Suggestion
a computer
computer
instead
of doing something else, moreover
, they can do variety of entertainment on the internet: reading free novels, establishing community, watching movies, even playing e-sport
can be done. Eventually, they would not want to do what they think might bore, for instance
, doing fun.
However
, this
trend of increasing playing computer
for children's free day might be a negative for development. It is true that playing computer
has many benefits, but also
, there are drawbacks. Sit-in the same position for a long period of time may cause you some fitness problems, specifically, backache, or office syndrome. Furthermore when
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computer, they
computer screen
which can cause eye problem, Suggestion
the computer screen
a computer screen
in particular
, myopia. In contrast
, doing sport
can be many benefits over just playing computer
not only for health issue, but also
real-life interaction with people.
In conclusion, I think both playing computer
and doing sport
has both benefits and drawbacks. Children should balance their time to spend on playing computer
and doing sport
, in spite of just playing computer
, which can cause many health problems. Furthermore playing
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Furthermore, playing
sport
may beneficial to their health, and eventually, their real-life interaction.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.