Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. What is the purpose of taxes? Why do some people refuse to pay taxes and explain the effects on society?

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I disagree with the statement that individuals should not pay
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to the state. The
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Runs
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the
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from the
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it collects.
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are collected only from those who earn above a
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minimum limit. It is our moral duty to pay
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.
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money collected by
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government
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is used to fund basic amenities, provide various services to Citizens and for
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administration and projects running
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jails and defence
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and
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other operations. It is not wrong to say that “
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run a
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."
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, it is very important For a
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to make
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pay
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. Let us analyze why
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do not want to pay
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. The main reason is their dissatisfaction with
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government
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in serving them. They blame
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government
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the government
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for things like a lack of infrastructure, Poverty and unemployment, but they are not completely wrong as
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revenue is misused in some Or
the
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other way in every
country
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. In developed countries,
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, because of higher satisfaction
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government's
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the government's
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functioning, citizens may be more willing to pay
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. Another factor Generating
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the
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tax
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structure itself. Often the
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system is complex and it drives
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away from paying
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, it is
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felt that the
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rates are high and
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slabs are unequal. So they feel it is not unethical if one goes for
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avoidance or
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evasion Not paying
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can drastically affect a
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's revenue generation, my own
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, India, for That matter. But
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, it is desired that
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comes up with a fair
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structure and
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make
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aware
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the
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are being diverted. Even lowering the
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rates can help a
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Increase its
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collection as it would increase compliance among the taxpayers.
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reform should
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be fast so that no public grievance or non-compliance remains for long A proper
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system Backed up with strict
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laws can produce the best results.Governmentusion, I believe that
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it
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is the
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is the
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interested
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interest
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citizen
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citizens
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to pay
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and the duty of every
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to use it appropriately in
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interest
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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