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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#government #money #railways #roads
The most of
countries
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the countries
 have to draw attention
to improve
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to improving
 their country of ways, so that countries spend more and more on railways and roads,
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
this
 is
comfortable
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comfort
more comfortable
 and safety for
profits
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profit
 driver and humans and
then
 it is
attracted
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attracting
 a lot of other countries of people. I agree with following
to
being one more than one
two
statement
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statements
 which
government
 should spend money on roads.
This
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next
 details by examples.
Firstly
, the countries
are developing
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is developing
step
 to
step
 their railways and roads. The big cities of roads have
the high
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higher
the highest
 level of
smooth
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smoothness
, as result their
car and
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car, and
 humans have to move at each other their ways.
Thus
, there
are
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is
 the high level of cars in the
government
, while it is supporting more and more with speed of vehicles as well as
this
 gives
comfortables
things that make you comfortable and at ease
comforts
comfortable
 the high
step
 their vehicle and humans are moving
the faster
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the fastest
 by the roads and railways.
On the other hand
, the most of governments should spend many
investment
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investments
 on railways and roads that it is
first
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the first step
a first step
step
for
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in
 development.
Moreover
,
This
 is attracted overseas of people to themselves
government
.
For instance
, There are a lot of countries
such
 as Dubai, Singapore and
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
.
Also
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Also, this
this
governments
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government
are attracted
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is attracted
 only
for
being one more than three
four
 ways,
may be
by chance
maybe
 there are many places for
attractive
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the attractiveness
attractiveness
 of people.
However
,
this
countries
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country
have
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has
 at least models vehicles and simple of place cars are changed the high level quality
to
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of
 vehicles. To sum up, the most
government
's should spend money on roads and railways,
as a
result they
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result, they
 take
profit
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profits
,
convenients
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
 and speeds from that,
this
 is true of ways to
attracted
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attract
 overseas of people as well.
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