Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The most of
countries
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the countries
have to draw attention
to improve
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to improving
their country of ways, so that countries spend more and more on railways and roads,
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
this
is
comfortable
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comfort
more comfortable
and safety for
profits
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profit
driver and humans and
then
it is
attracted
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attracting
a lot of other countries of people. I agree with following
to
being one more than one
two
statement
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statements
which
government
should spend money on roads.
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Firstly
, the countries
are developing
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is developing
step
to
step
their railways and roads. The big cities of roads have
the high
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higher
the highest
level of
smooth
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smoothness
, as result their
car and
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car, and
humans have to move at each other their ways.
Thus
, there
are
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is
the high level of cars in the
government
, while it is supporting more and more with speed of vehicles as well as
this
gives
comfortables
things that make you comfortable and at ease
comforts
comfortable
the high
step
their vehicle and humans are moving
the faster
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the fastest
by the roads and railways.
On the other hand
, the most of governments should spend many
investment
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investments
on railways and roads that it is
first
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the first step
a first step
step
for
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in
development.
Moreover
,
This
is attracted overseas of people to themselves
government
.
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, There are a lot of countries
such
as Dubai, Singapore and
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others
.
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Also, this
this
governments
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government
are attracted
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is attracted
only
for
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four
ways,
may be
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maybe
there are many places for
attractive
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the attractiveness
attractiveness
of people.
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,
this
countries
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country
have
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has
at least models vehicles and simple of place cars are changed the high level quality
to
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of
vehicles. To sum up, the most
government
's should spend money on roads and railways,
as a
result they
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result, they
take
profit
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profits
,
convenients
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
and speeds from that,
this
is true of ways to
attracted
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attract
overseas of people as well.
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