“Prevention is better than the cure.” Researching and treating disease is too costly and so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extend do you agree?

It is highly believed that “one ounce of prevention is better than one pound of cure” since investing in methods and medicine to treat illness is extremely prohibitive and complicated,

hence

putting effort into delving prevention is more beneficial. Personally, I completely

agree with

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agree with this

this

this

suggestion because it would save more lives and be financially effective.

Firstly

, if doctors and pathologist start researching and studying about diseases that possibly harmful and detrimental for the community, they will have more

time

to find the most suitable vaccine or drugs and test its efficacy beforehand.

Thus

,

incase

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in case

patients needed to be treated with the

disease

, the medicine had already been tested and safely use.

In addition

, vaccine and appropriate

first

aid would be available to protect community and individual’s

heath

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

;

therefore

,

fatality rate

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the fatality rate

would decrease and life quality would increase radically.

For instance

, leprosy or rubies used to spread fear because it was thought to be incurable.

However

, thanks to

researches

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the researches

and experiment throughout decades, children nowadays can prevent it by a vaccine at

birth which

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birth, which

indicate that

time

is one of the most important contributory factors to win against sickness.

Secondly

, it would be more expensive and dangerous to act when the illness

is already become

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has already become

is already becoming

already becomes

a pandemic. In

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

words, without clinical measures to fight the

disease

, heath of

citizen

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the citizen

citizens

would be at risk and it will cost more

time

and lives before

government

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the government

can contain and control the contagious

disease

. If more people get sick,

hospital

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the hospital

hospitals

will be

overload

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overloaded

,

heath care system

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the heath care system

will be more likely to collapse,

this

dramatically

effect

have an effect upon

affect

the workforce,

hence

the

economic

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economy

can not function normally and productively.

Moreover

,

government

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the government

then

would have to

funds

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fund

researchers and medical institute to find the cure which could have been studied before thousands of people had suffered.

For example

, as the COVID-19 outbreak

continue

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continues

, death tolls rising every day and surpassing any pandemic that had

occur

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occurred

, shortage of equipment, inadequate measures and delayed response have failed to prevent the

disease

. To conclude, prevent the

disease

before it

become

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becomes

difficult to contain is a better and safer choice

then

treating afterward. I think that governments should encourage and invest in medical prevention to save

time

and lives.