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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs.

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hese
Suggestion
These
Hese
 days the most of
education
Suggestion
educational
 institutions are already providing opportunities to gain work experience in charity organization, but these are not obligatory.
Nevertheless
, some people suggest that it is a sensible idea for young people to be a compulsory part of non-profit social activities. I partly agree with
this
 statement for following reasons. On the one hand, I believe that it is beneficial for young people to do a voluntary work owing to the fact that students can learn how to communicate and work in a team. They will meet a lot of new people with whom they will have to solve different issues.
For instance
, developed countries
such
 as the USA fund colleges'
charity
Suggestion
charitable
 organizations from the state budget.
This
 is why there countries have a great network of charity programs.
Also
, I believe it is good workable idea to practice live communication in our social media addicted world. It is a well-known fact that nowadays a huge number of people prefer to surf the Internet than meet face-to-face with friends.
In other words
, participation in public life is useful for
emotional development
Suggestion
the emotional development
 of young people as personal interaction evokes feelings of delight and satisfaction.
On the other hand
, I suppose that the decision to participate in public life should
be
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Be
 freewill. It is essential for youth to have a choice because it is common knowledge that making someone do something by force may have an adverse effect.
As a result
, children who were obligated to do social service against their will might develop a negative attitude to it, which may make them insensitive to community problems in the future. To conclude, I suppose that it is vital to keep balance between social life and studies. No doubt, it is only beneficial to be a part of a public or social organization if
this
 participation is
freewill
Suggestion
free will
 and well-organized.
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