In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

Education

is mandatory for making successful career. Some people argue that after secondary

education children

Accept comma addition

education, children

are motivated

toward

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to

work,

although

some people think that they can enjoy a

travel

mode. While both approaches

has

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have

their own advantages and disadvantages,

this

essay will emphasise both approaches along with

pros

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the pros

and cons in following paragraphs. To commence with, by employee, children can able to understand

importants

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the importance

importance

of

money

. To buttress, since by adopting employment opportunities they can give more value to hard work, they will realise

value

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the value

of

money

and they will not make

themselve

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

as

a

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an

extravagant person.

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Apart

from significant, one drawback

also

, due to materialistic person, they

can not

can not

cannot

concentrate on their

further

education

.

This

is because, grid of

money

, they can spend more time in working place

instead

of

education

.

Hence

, they will not able to get success in their life.

For example

, over 35% of people who had not been completed their

education

because of

job

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the job

. Alternatively, enjoy a

travel

has far many ascendancy.

First

and foremost, they

gets

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get

more time to spend with their family to enjoy

natural beauty

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the natural beauty

like, a mountain, a river, and so on. To add, they can be able to enjoy a trip with their family member though which they can increase their bonding.

On the other hand

, by

travel

, jubilant who might face some serious obstacle

such

as accident,

therefore

they can face some condition like handicap. By

this

, they will not make successful life.

For instance

, according to Mumbai University, India, where over 6% of people who had faced

tragedy

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the tragedy

a tragedy

of handicap by

travel

. Henceforth to conclude, choosing

employment option

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an employment option

, pupils can obtain important of

money

, while they

can not

can not

cannot

focus on study. By trip, teenagers can get a chance to enjoy

trip

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a trip

with their family,

although

some serious problems might be faced by

travel

.