You are a student at an English language school and are living in private accommodation with other students from the school. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problems propose a solution

I am writing
this
letter to let you know residents of your flat in
the
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Park Street, London
have
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been suffering from a cold water issue. After discussing with 2 other flatmates from the college of Cambridge, I decided to nudge you about the difficulty we are facing. You might know that
Mr.
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Jon Snow, the building's repairman, failed to fix the water heating problem because of the lack of new parts. We,
therefore
, are unable to do our regular chores and
as a result
, our daily routines and schedules are getting hindered.
Furthermore
, one of our flatmates often gets high favour for having cold-water showers. As a possible solution, you can either give
further
directions to
Mr.
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Snow to repair the heating problem or order an online service, which charges pretty low, from the repairmen.com website. I would like to hear from you as soon as convenient which options you prefer.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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