Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.

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Nowadays, studying abroad is a normal thing. Because of everyone begin seeing
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of studying. Studying abroad get many advantages. In my view, when we have the opportunity to study abroad, we got many things about own country we are living or learning. Developing yourself, improve level languages, opinions, team work skill, so on. It
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makes us stronger or more confidence. Especially, when you try to learn and working hard,
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definitely we are going to get many offers or opportunities in businesses and daily life. So
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wanna inform everyone of studying abroad is very good for youth. But it
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two sides, it have many disadvantages. You can not come back, your country for a long time to focus studying and living and
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definitely the mind which always exists in your head. Conflict languages are one of all difficult while you are learning abroad.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bilingual
  • multilingual
  • fluency
  • communicate
  • cognitive skills
  • cultural awareness
  • opportunities
  • globalized world
  • job market
  • interact
  • linguistic abilities
  • cultural exchange
  • language proficiency
  • language barrier
  • foreign travel
  • personal growth
  • academic achievement
  • self-confidence
  • enhance
  • cross-cultural communication
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