On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Manager, I am writing
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letter to inform you that on a recent holiday to Mexico, I lost my
laptop
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. It was a black-coloured ASUS company, model XS, with the latest features. The cost of the
laptop
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in the market is 900 dollars. It was brand new when bought it. I was at a restaurant named, Shinka Shushi Bar with a group of friends. We were enjoying the food. So, I kept my
laptop
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bag, near my chair on a stool. Later we were all set to leave.
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, after I realized the
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was missing from the stool. I tried searching everywhere but was unable to find it.
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, I realized the
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got lost.
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, I was glad that my
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has insurance with your company.
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, I am entitled to request reimbursement for my
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. Kindly provide a gift card to buy a new one or let me know how I can move forward with the claim. I await your prompt service. Yours sincerely Harshit Kaur
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coherence cohesion
Consider reviewing and refining the structure further to ensure that each paragraph seamlessly leads into the next, enhancing the overall flow of your letter.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, provide more detailed descriptions or explanations if possible. This could include more specific details about the lost item or steps you took immediately after losing it.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of your letter followed the conventions of a formal letter effectively.
coherence cohesion
You structured your letter around a clear progression of ideas: describing the lost item, explaining how it was lost, and concluding with a request for the insurance company's action. This logical structure made your letter easy to follow.
task achievement
Your tone throughout the letter was suitably formal and appropriate for writing to an insurance company manager, which is commendable.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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