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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Negative student
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 in
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school environment
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the school environment
school environments
 has become alarmingly high about which many people are concerned.
School
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 managers mention the steady growth of these trends will damage the education system. I believe that you can find the reasons of
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 disorder in our educational environments and non-qualified teachers. It is strongly proved that the atmosphere has a significant effect on human reactions. Low air quality standards, lacking of air conditioning, insufficient space for playing, crowded environments are some examples that scientists have proven to be linked to
students
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students'
student
student's
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. The reason is that students are young and energetic so they need to have more outdoor activities. Governments should modify
school
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 standards and allocate more subsidies to
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 managers to reorganize the facilities and space and
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 to change the shape of our educational area from an office to a calm place for our students.
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 that, most of our teachers and
school
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 managers are not qualified personnel. Statistics show that just three out of twenty five teachers in my country have passed mental related courses and are familiar with some basic needs of students and youngsters. The results attributed to our
school
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 managers is worst by just three persons out of a hundred which indicates that there is a strong demand for using of psychologists and educational consultants to plan
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an
 appropriate program.
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