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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

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Nowadays, some people are of the firm belief that children should be taught by their parents how to behave in
society
. There are
also
 people who think that the
school
's environment would show to kids how to have good manners in life.
This
 essay agrees that parents are
responsablefor
 their
children
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children's
' education and will discuss both points of view. It is generally agreed that the support from family is a crucial factor in the proper development of a kid as he is growing.
Moreover
, the immediate family is decisive, as the mother and the father are spending most of the child's time with him in his
first
 years of adolescence. No one but the mother or father could show to the child how to be polite and to respect the others, as they are doing the same to
mentain
keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"
maintain
 a well-built
society
.
For example
, maybe there is a situation where the kid is
disconsidering
 somebody, like most of them do with colleagues from
school
 to whom they are not getting along at all. Beside of the fact that the parents should teach children how to be an honourable person, there are some that think
school
 should do
this
.
However
, I think
this
 is not happening, and merely children face at
school
inappropiate
not suitable for a particular occasion etc
inappropriate
 behaviours, in some cases. The main reason why
this
 environment is not
proper
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properly
 related to
this
 point is due to the fact that teachers do not give any of their personal time to teach them how to become a good member
for
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of
society
, and the syllabus does not cover any related subjects
to
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for
this
. To conclude, a person who respects the others and who knows what are the basic principles for living a good life in respect to the whole
society
 was a child taught by his parents what good manners are.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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