Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays to

engage in

make

shopping online for literature, plane tickets and groceries

is being done

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are being done

with more frequency. I believe that the advantages of

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matter outweighs the disadvantages, for sure.

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all with

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all, with

the online shopping available it is possible to buy your groceries from the comfort of our home which is extremely

effective

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effective, hence

hence

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you spend less

time

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doing it which gives the advantage of focusing on other activities

such

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as spending quality

time

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with your family or exercising, doing anything that makes you healthier and happier.

In addition

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this

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argument there is the temptation of buying things one

do not need

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does not need

that decreases if they are not exposed right in front of our

sight

the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)

site

For example

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going to a supermarket and seeing our

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

chocolate or a new book from our author of

election there

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election, there

the election there

the election the election there

will be the instinct of taking it home in the meanwhile if we are shopping from home

this

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could never happen. Another topic that should be taken

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into

consideration is being able to buy an air ticket online,

this

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gives people the opportunity to check other prices, compare and take the

time

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needed without being influenced by

anyone

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anyone, hence

hence

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not to have a prompt to do it but most of all it allows the possibility of buying it anywhere as long as there is access to the internet.

For

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example if

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example, if

you live abroad and an emergency

happens it

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happens, it

is possible to buy the plane ticket on your way to the airport without loosing any

time

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. People are buying their things on the internet more regularly and

this

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brings a great deal of advantages in their daily

lives

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lives, such

such

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as the saving of

time

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, the reduction of buying things unnecessary and the possibility to do shopping of many kinds

anyplace

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and anytime.

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, In my opinion people benefit on a great extent by buying things online.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

315 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
time-saving
wide selection
competitive prices
discounts
accessibility
global marketplace
availability
fraud
scams
lack of
physical interaction
personal experience
impersonal
customer service
delays
delivery
return process

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Some people feel that the legal age which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining? Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved