Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits Do you agree or disagree ?

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In
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contemporary world, transformation is now a part of everyday's life.
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, according to
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a few people
the few people
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brings out more challenges rather than advantages. From my point of view, I elucidate my views and stand against the notion.
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,
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essay will state the reason behind it with certain arguments and supporting it with relevant examples followed by the conclusion. To embark upon, population is magnifying day by day, due to which people's demand is
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at zenith and to meet their desires on time, rapid solution to ever particular problem is required which can only be possible with continuous and structured alterations. To cite an example, In India, earlier 2G telecom technology was sufficient for the
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with the boom of globalization the launch of 4G was mandatory.
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, when it comes to job creation, innovation plays a salient role in doing
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. There
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a plethora of social
media entertainment
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media, entertainment
applications which are running 365 days and 24 X 7 hours a week with millions of subscribers and to manage the
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software and operations a myriad number of people work day and night and
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, earn their livelihood.
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, the eminent mobile app Tik-Tok generated thousands of jobs worldwide in multiple sectors
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as Information Technology, Designing, Digital Marketing and many more to ensure their business is running smooth and revenue is being generated. In summary, with the everyday new challenge humans cannot survive without innovations and for many it becomes a source of income.
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