Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Hello
dear
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, I apologise about the noise that comes from
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our

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out house
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outhouse

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. That noise happened because my son had graduated from his faculty yesterday. He
finally
became an English teacher. You know what is the teacher, He completely has a license to can teach
English
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the English

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language at any school he wants. He
also
invited his friends Ali, Samir and Soha to share with them his funny moments about his graduation. Let me tell you more about our festival, My son
first
brought some cakes and Pepsi to eat and drink during our festival,
then
he
also
brought some pictures of 3D type about us to take photos using these pictures. He did not forget to invite our relatives to share
the
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their

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happiness with us. They all were grateful. As
i
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I

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said earlier, I repeat my apologies
for
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to

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you
about
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for

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the noise that you totally heard because of us. See you soon.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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