Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

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Hello
dear
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, I apologise about the noise that comes from
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our
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out house
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outhouse
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. That noise happened because my son had graduated from his faculty yesterday. He
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became an English teacher. You know what is the teacher, He completely has a license to can teach
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the English
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language at any school he wants. He
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invited his friends Ali, Samir and Soha to share with them his funny moments about his graduation. Let me tell you more about our festival, My son
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brought some cakes and Pepsi to eat and drink during our festival,
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he
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brought some pictures of 3D type about us to take photos using these pictures. He did not forget to invite our relatives to share
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happiness with us. They all were grateful. As
i
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said earlier, I repeat my apologies
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you
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the noise that you totally heard because of us. See you soon.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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