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Some people say that art (e.g painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only be made by those with special ability . discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Submitted by krunal6689 on Wed, 09/28/2016 - 06:43 Art is something which comes directly from the heart and the artist is the one, who will just displays his heart words onto a paper, in the form of a picture or a poetry etc. In my opinion, to be an artist, it requires regular
practice
 for all to achieve a certain level.
Firstly
, there are some people who think that to be an artist is
such
 easy as walking in the park. Yes, many of them can do that, but to achieve that they simply have to do daily exercise. By doing the
practice
in particular
 art will give a tremendous success. From
this
 point of view anyone can get the attainment what they desire. But
on the other hand
, there are certain mankind’s, who thinks that to have a great triumph in
a
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of
rt, a person should have special abilities. An individual with
such
 abilities does not require,
such
 rehearse as normal do. They have a unique vision to approach for the particular laurel. They can easily grab each small detail, where as normal’s cannot do.
For example
, a person who is hardworking and do regular
practice
 will get good success, but at a certain level, he might lack. Where
on the other hand
 an individual with the special skills will have no worry, because of the power that he has. So,
last
 but not the least I want to conclude that, and art is something, which requires a lo
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lot
f skills, hard work,
practice
 as well as the abilities to learn it quick .
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,
ot simply a piece of cake even for the person who has special skills, an individual can lack if they do not
practice
 regularly.
That is
 why someone said “
PRACTICE
 MAKES A MAN PERFECT
Submitted by sodhadaljeet on

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