The age of Information Technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn. Eventually, we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems.

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There is no shadow of doubt that Information
technology
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has changed the world we live in. The advent of computers and the internet in daily
life
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has changed the way we communicate and do some of the basic tasks. While the younger
generation
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has quickly embraced the
technology
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in their everyday
life
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, a large fraction of the older
generation
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is struggling to understand and use the
technology
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. With the introduction of information
technology
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people are becoming dependent on it, as it has bought
lot
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lots
of changes in
last
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few decades.
For instance
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, sending letters has been replaced by sending electronic mail and text messages, social media like Facebook, twitter and
instagram
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has taken the place of television and radio.
Other task
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Other tasks
such
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as booking tickets for travelling or watching can be done using the smart phones. For transferring money,
person
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a person
doesn’t need to go bank it can be easily done online.
Moreover
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,
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
it is playing a vital role in
education sector
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the education sector
as online test and classes are available online.
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, the younger
generation
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has adopted the
technology
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very quickly. Using a
computers
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computer
in primary school has become important and from that children are learning many
thing
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things
which
further
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proves helpful in higher studies and in many aspects of
life
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.
However
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,
still large number
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a still large number
a still larger number
of people who belongs to old
generation
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are struggling to use
technology
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in daily
life
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.
This
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is because, they are not able to learn the things so easily and quickly as
the young
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the younger
generation
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. For that they need proper guidance and assistance to learn and they have to practice using
thing
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the thing
in day to day
life
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. In order to recapitulate, today where the world is moving towards a polarized society, one group is almost totally dependent on
technology
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for the work and many other
purpose
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purposes
. But still some fraction of people
are struggling
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is struggling
to lean
such
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technologies.
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