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Demand for food is increasing world wide. What is the causes of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

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Food
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 is the necessity of living being. As the population is increasing day by day, ultimately, the demand for the
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 is
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 increasing with
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. To cope up with the need of of the eatables, international communities can take some steps for
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. Lets discuss in the following paragraphs.
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 and foremost,
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 is the basic need for all of us to survive and it is taken in many forms
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 as, vegetarian and non-vegetarian. Basic cause of the increasing demand of
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 is the high mortality rate.
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, it is quite obvious that, demand is supply is somewhere directly proportional to each other. So, to meet
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, there should be increases in the production of the eatable things,
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, pulses, cereals, vegetables, fruits, meat and dairy products.
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, these communities have to take some mandatory steps to increase the production and supply of these products.
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, now a day, a lot of company employees and students ordered their meal from outside and due to unknown reasons the taste, texture and some time quantity does not meet up to the expectation of them, as the result, them through that
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. As far as, some steps should be taken to stop the wastage of the
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.
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, the government should put some rules or fine against the drugging of
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. As well as, some
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 awareness
food
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 can be organised for the public, so that people should help
the neediest
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the needy
 with
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instead
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 of throwing them. To conclude, no one survives without
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, so international communities can take the essential steps towards the increase in agriculture produce by raising funds from the government.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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