A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

# Essay Nowadays people appreciate person according to its financial condition as well as its fiscal ability. Meanwhile honour, kindness, ancient customs as well as values, trust trivial for individual's worth. I personally believe to
this
point of view and in
this
essay I will explain my agreement with some details. The
first
of all, now human being
respect
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respects
to each other according to their fortune. If someone indigent it would be inappreciable. So that now all of individuals try to be opulent. Currently, oof is very vital insomuch among friends.
For instance
, my
uncle
told about his friends that
initially
they
very adores
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is very adoring
when my
uncle
worked as a boss and
also
when he was dives. After few time my
uncle
went to bankrupt and all of his valuable friends turned away from him.
However
, after a while he becomes wealthy again and his false friends returned to him as impertinently. But my
uncle
did not recognise them. It is an example of importance of richness among friends. Following to
this
, relatives
also
attend to abundance and homage
also
depends on it. One day my friend told me about her relatives. According to her talk her aunt was not very rich, so that relatives do not revere her. They do not go to her holidays or birthday parties, sometimes insomuch they do not congratulate her by phone. They do not help her when she has problems.
However
, my friend's another aunt is very well-wheeled, so that she is very appreciable by others. Her relatives always help to her, frequently visit
to
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with
her as a guest, often make calls, always visit to congratulate her when she has a birthday. So that according to
this
action my friend
also try
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also tries
to be rich. To conclude, according to over mentioned examples that presently no one respects each other according to their ancient values, kindness and trust, as well as an honour. They are trivial than wealth. Perhaps, they do not know that richness cannot always help with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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