Topic: The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

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Everyone knows that nowadays
use
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the use
of cars is getting more popular because of people's diverse necessities. And it is leading to many problems, especially urban areas because some people prefer using private cars to walking and cycling even if the unlimited
use
of cars results in a range of various serious
situation
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situations
.
Besides
the benefits, cars have a main role to play in our lives as most people in our country
use
cars so as to go to work, to travel and earn money. The cars make a close our remote distance and improve our relations with other countries, specifically our country exports numerous products via cars to other countries and a great number of tourists come to our country by cars. On the whole, the cars are whatsoever for our lifestyle, but the unlimited
use
of cars is likely to cause many problems. As for a lot of problems of the unlimited
use
of vehicles, they may bring on various diseases and cause many disastrous
situation
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situations
and lack of physical movements. Diseases can include headaches, eye diseases, whereas disastrous
situation
includes car accident and breaking down of cars. There is no doubt that vehicles can be a major problem of air pollution now that the cars produce plenty of different toxic gases and damage environment. When all people
use
the cars at the same time, that
situation
leads to traffic jams which is one of the most important problems of
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transports. In conclusion, in my opinion, we should be used to more walking or cycling than cars to go to not too far distance. Certainly, it is whatsoever for our health and doesn't demand extra expenses.
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