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You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • describe the problem • say how long it has been a problem • explain what action you want the neighbour to take

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Dear
Mr.
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Sam, I am writing
this
 letter with regards to the problem which I have been facing. I am getting a quite unbearable noise from your home, especially in the evening time. I guess it's because of the volume of your TV.
Due
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of
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loudness, I am unable to concentrate on my postgraduate thesis, which I need to complete by the end of
this
 month.
Initially
, when I joined
in
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this
 apartment the frequency of that noise is very rare.
However
, from
last
 weekend onwards the volume got increased
too
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high
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 level. With that much
of
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noise, anyone can easily disturb. I request you to control the volume of your smart TV or any other infotainment
devices
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. Alternatively, you can move to any other community area where
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sound pollution is not a problem for your neighbours. I hope you will consider it as a priority issue and take
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necessary action
accordingly
. Yours sincerely, Meera
shareef
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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