The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Since their

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introduction in England, cars

have evolved

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has evolved

and became one of our most important technological breakthroughs, yet some people believe that cars brought more harm than good not only to the

environment but

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environment, but

to our day-to-day lives, others argue that they are a vital piece of technology. From my perspective, the advantages of cars exceed its disadvantages. On one

hand there

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hand, there

are only a few drawbacks of cars. The increase in pollution and traffic jams are the biggest problems caused by the expanding number of vehicles.

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, our over dependence on cars have lead to a decrease in physical activities,

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as running, walking, and cycling, which resulted in an increased levels of obesity.

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, I believe that the benefits of cars are more significant.The most important advantage is that they are a faster and a more convenient way of

transportation

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Convenience

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A convenience

which cars bring can be found on no other means of

transportation

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.

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, you can go from destination to destination and time is wasted waiting for trains and busses while if you choose your car as a

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gate

way of

transportation

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you will not wait for anything and you can stop at various places where other vehicles are not allowed to.

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, cars have become

the most safest

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the safest

way of

transportation

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. Today’s vehicles look nothing like the ones

form

a giver or sender

from

the 60’s and 70’s because they did not have safety features, whereas today they are packed with multiple components that assure

noting

a quantity of no importance

nothing

will happen to the driver and passengers. Tesla, is the primary example of

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where they

have develop

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have developed

a car which received almost a perfect score on crash tests, which means that you have almost no chance of dying in an accident. To sum it up, the advantages produced by vehicles in our health clearly outstrip the disadvantages.

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, people shouldn’t use them to get to every destination to minimize the risk of obesity and other health problems.