Talk about your opinion about Coronavirus in Syria

#coronavirus #syria

Is the world going to survive from Coronavirus (COVID-19)? All people are wondering. Some of them are

optimistic others

Accept comma addition

optimistic, others

are pessimistic. The Syrian

government

took all the precautionary measures to avoid the spread of

this

pandemic virus.

On the other hand

, we as Syrian citizens must follow the instructions and cooperate with our

government

First

of all, Quarantine is one of the important steps to do. Our

government

closed everything except pharmacies, Hospitals, Bakeries, Banks, Groceries and fast food shops in order to avoid gathering of people. In spite of that, Infected people increased. So they force everyone to stay home from 6:00 pm to 6:00 am.

Secondly

, they closed all kinds of borders (sea, land and air). Of course, they didn’t abandon Syrian citizens who were abroad and open the airport just to bring them back home.

Then

the

government

took them to isolated hotels for 14 Days to make sure they were not affected or carried the virus.

Finally

, we must stay home, cooperate with each other and don’t fly in the face of our

government

’s instructions. In my opinion, our

government

did

produced by a manufacturing process

made

a lot of precautionary measures to ebb that dangerous pandemic virus.

Furthermore

, if we stick to the instructions we will get rid of it and we will restore our normal life.

Thu Apr 30 2020

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