Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Over the years, advances in technology have revolutionized human learning and teaching methods. While some individuals think that online courses have a total of positive impacts which will alter conventional education, others argue that it is impossible to eliminate traditional classroom. In my opinion, each approach has its own benefits;
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, I support the later. On the one hand, online education undoubtedly offers various advantages for learners. On those benefits, convenience seems to be the greatest one. More specifically, as long as you own a computer with a reliable internet connection, distance no longer be the barrier to
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learning
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, you are able to learn from online lectures wherever you are and whenever you want at your own pace. The
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noteworthy benefit is that online programs would save
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the national budget
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campus is not necessary.
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, I hold the belief that traditional education is irreplaceable thanks to the following pros.
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, in a conventional classroom, students can directly share their views and clarify their own queries with the teacher,
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getting their questions answered right away.
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, attending
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not only makes us enjoy an exciting and friendly learning
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environment, but
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creates an academic competition among students.
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, it is compulsory for students
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facing
up to the sense of competition, so individuals must improve mutual understanding and
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try their best to achieve
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higher scores
a higher score
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, interactive learning will establish good personalities for learners, especially for those who are in lack of personal responsibility and self-discipline by following
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rules
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as going to
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in time, wearing
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uniform and finishing homework before classes. In conclusion, with obvious advantages it brings, e-learning would become an indispensable supplement in teaching and learning.
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, I strongly believe that it will hardly replace on-campus classes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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