You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • describe the training course you want to do • explain what the company could do to help you • say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir, I am writing in regard to a French language training
course
advertised in the magazine “Language and job” issue of 12th October
,
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2020. Let me provide you with some details concerning the training
course
. A prominent linguist and professor at Harvard University, John Marshall, has recently run the training
course
aimed to teach
French
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the French

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language
for
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employees. The full duration of the training
course
is six weeks, and takes place in the business centre “Sky”. I was wondering if you could provide me with a letter of recommendation, as
this
letter is required to enrol in the training
course
.
Also
, could you please temporarily change my work schedule for the
next
six weeks? As we know, the CEO of our company has recently signed a business contract with a French company “Ubisoft”. I believe that
this
training
course
will be extremely useful in communication with French partners, as we do not have an employee with knowledge of
French
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language in our team. Please, do not hesitate to contact me at a suitable time should any additional questions arise over my mobile phone
+78877777
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at +78877777

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or email
[email protected]
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. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
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