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In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measure can be taken to prevent this?

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The
air
 and
water
pollution
 from industries and
construction
 sites is becoming an issue in developing countries and declining the
air
 and
water
 quality.
This
 can be prevented by introducing
waste management plan
Suggestion
a waste management plan
 along with proper sanitisation, and
also
 educating people about the environmental hazards due to
pollution
 from
construction
 and factory waste.
Firstly
, the government should take measures to reduce the
water
pollution
 in developing countries by introducing proper rules and restrictions on
construction
 companies and industries responsible for putting waste into the
water
 bodies. In developing countries the concept of dump yards and disposal sites ought to be strictly imposed as it will reduce most of the burden.
Furthermore
, the Government ought to impose ban on factories and companies causing excessive smoke and
pollution
. More and more green belt areas should be introduced in cities and permissions for
construction
 in these areas should be banned.
However
, environment friendly
construction
 sites which use degenerative materials and have
construction
 rules will limit environmental distress due to
construction
. One more measure which will lower the
air
pollution
 and improve
air
 quality is planting more plants, even on the road sides and imposing tickets and charges that break the rule and eventually reducing traffic on the roads and improving public transport facilities. Authorities ought to focus more on renewable resources
such
 as, solar panels and windmills for generating electricity and using that electricity for electric cars and buses and
thus
, reducing use of fossil fuels. In conclusion, by providing green belt areas in the cities and renewable energy resources is the solution to better environment which is free from
air
 and
water
pollution
 in developing countries.

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