Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many people have stated that we should search for strategies to live with climate

change

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without fixing it. I fully disagree with

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idea and for

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essay will examine the reasons that can prove

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statement is not right.

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of all, Climate

change

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can cause the huge damage on animals

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as extinction and lack of places to live because due to climate

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the world is getting hotter and most water bodies are drying so there are not many places for water animals to live. Even, for animals which live on

tree

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the tree

trees

because of burning forest it does not have many places for them to live and it can lead to extinction.

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, For polar bears, they live only in

cold place

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a cold place

cold places

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pole but

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pole, but

most of the coldest places are melting and it can create a huge impact of losing polar bears in the future. Climate

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is the biggest reason of why many animals have

extincted

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, There are many problems for the Earth in the future if we do not fix it now because climate

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can cause many serious problem only if we keep on trying to living through it without finding a way to help the Earth. Nowadays, there are many serious problems that have damaged the world already if more problems to come, it can affect humans and animals even more.

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, Climate

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changes the weather to

hotter

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hot

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, In 2019, there was a burning fire in Australia and it killed a lot of trees, plants and many living animals that can lead to many more problems

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as extinction of koalas and the increasing of toxic smoke. Another way to say that many problems are ready to arrive and damage us all if we do not find a way. In conclusion, Climate

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is much

serious

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more serious

than we can think of.

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, The statement is totally wrong because it can make animals extinct and cause serious

prolems

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

if people keep on ignoring

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problem.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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