Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas in any way they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

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The thinking that ideas in general, is only limited by one’s imagination, has been engraved upon students of many generations for years and will be for many more. To be more specific, art, assuming the person in context is a competent artist, should

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be only seized when

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artist cannot make up new ideas.

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, in certain parts of the world if not all, a certain list of ideas and topics are completely forbidden, which raised the questions: Should artists be free to speak whatever they want through their art? Should the government restrain those specific topics and why did they do so? I am no artist as the best I can draw are

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, but I would like to flow out my opinion that I have an understanding for both while leaning a bit more towards the artists, and will explain more in

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of all, artists should be allowed to express themselves and their spirit children in

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way they want. Whether it be sound tracks, paintings, comics,

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videos, Tiktok uploads, or even a real life campaign, and many other ways, is up to their conscious decisive mind and their budget to decide. The amount of possible outputs is only limited by how many ideas they can come up with during their available time and how healthy they are to continue working. The freedom of choice is there, for them to freely use it

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they wish to. And those who run the

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should have no problem, and no say on

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matter. The problem, though, lies in what kind the creator is

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into their form of media. Let it be general topics like housing, school, office work, marriage, or more specific topics like

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, Donald Trump fan fictions,

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music or even Minecraft music block memes, the worst the government might say is that the work not interesting, which is fine considering everyone has not the same taste for art.

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, topics like encouraging war and terrorism, revealing top secret military secrets, brainwashing others to believe in nonsense leading to death of many, should absolutely be forbidden by all means possible. One prime example taken from Vietnam, is that despite the

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is becoming more and more democratic regardless of the Socialist part in its full name: members of the old Republic of Vietnam, or so called the old South Vietnam, along with their offspring and followers, whom considered traitors by today Viets due to them leaving their

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during its worst time, has been making up fake stories of the authorities being mere puppets and building rallies and campaign trying to falsely educate others that their hoax are real, and a riot is needed. Many of them have still

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in Vietnam, and is day by day spreading fallacy by posting on the nation’s most used social media- Facebook. The government has

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them potential terrorists, and has been doing their best in combating them. Coming to a conclusion, it is safe to say that artists, while doing what they love for the passion and the thickness of their wallet, should relate to social norms within his or her community of media, and always play by the laws. No matter what they might

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, from formal newspaper writing to Discord

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas in any way they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

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Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

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