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1. explain why you have to make changes 2. tell them the changes 3. apologize for the changes

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Dear Mr. Smith and Ms. May, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you the changes we have made to the coming conference between our two companies. Our supervisor of
this
 project, Mr. Clarkson, is unfortunately not able to get to our headquarters in Beijing from Shanghai in time due to the unexpected flight delay. He has now re-booked his flight and will be
get
Suggestion
getting
 here tomorrow morning. As he is the key person
of
Suggestion
on
this
 project, we feel the meeting could not be held without him.
Therefore
, we have to rearrange the meeting to be held tomorrow afternoon, at 15 o’clock. And the location of our meeting will still be Room 123, Continental Hotel, No.100, King Street. We are very sorry for any inconvenience caused for the changes. If you have any
further
 questions, please do feel free to contact me. Looking forwards to seeing you soon! Yours sincerely, Pirlo
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