Nowadays, while some think that it is good for business meetings and business training to be taken place online, others think it has cons. Discuss both views and given your opinion.

The development of technology and communication system lead to many online activities,
such
as interview, meeting and business training. It is undeniable that some people think thing taken place online is good.
Although
many people still think
it
it is
it's
bad. From my point of view, I strongly agree that
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
good. But, it
depens
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
depend
on the way you use it and the
information
that you have, described in the following paragraph. When things become online it very easy for every
people
Suggestion
person
to join and to spread the
information
.
Furthermore
, online meeting
,
Accept space
,
studying and many other things are easy to connect and not waste your time by transportation because you can connect online all the time, if you have an
electromic
of or relating to electronics; concerned with or using devices that operate on principles governing the behavior of electrons
electronic
electronics
device. It is
the good
Suggestion
the best
way for small companies
to sell
Suggestion
sell
selling
their product. Though, they don't have to spend a lot of money on open the store in the popular mall. They can just use the impact advertisement.
Therefore
, they can sell their goods widely with less amount of money.
On the contrary
,
online system
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the online system
is dangerous for a person who don't have enough knowledge and
information
. We cannot trust some fake thing online. Before, we buy
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
product
online we
Accept comma addition
online, we
have to read the
information
obviously and seriously check the seller personal
information
.
It
Suggestion
It's
as easy as a pie for
thief
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thieves
a thief
to do online business. They can create fake personal
information
and let us trust them. To conclude, I strongly agree that things taken online is good. But, before you trust anything or buy anything online you should have an
information
about the product and the seller.

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