You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of how long you will be away • suggest how you will make up for the lost time

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter with regard to any

time

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off to the regular duties of the company. Basically, the predominant reason for

this

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time

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off is because of the

homesick

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, as well as I want to spend

time

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with family. Since I am staying in a private hotel which is close to the office and my family is in my hometown. I feel like missing my family space so I want to spend some good

moment

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with my family members. I would like to take off for a period of a

week

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starting from the

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Monday.

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, I thought of considering 2 weeks rather than a

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but due to insufficient leave balance in my

account

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I am not opting for a 2

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period.

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I am off to work for about a

week

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, in order to compensate

that

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one

week

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time

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off, I would like to work extra hours daily. So that I can deliver the project assignments within the timeline. Alternatively, it would be great if you could provide any other options apart from spending extra hours. Yours faithfully, Meera Shareef

Fri May 01 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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