You work for a small company. You need to arrange for some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter • explain why you want to take time off work • give details of how long you will be away • suggest how you will make up for the lost time

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter with regard to any

time

off to the regular duties of the company. Basically, the predominant reason for

this

time

off is because of the

homesick

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homesickness

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, as well as I want to spend

time

with family. Since I am staying in a private hotel which is close to the office and my family is in my hometown. I feel like missing my family space so I want to spend some good

moment

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moments

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with my family members. I would like to take off for a period of a

week

starting from the

Monday.

Initially

, I thought of considering 2 weeks rather than a

week

but due to insufficient leave balance in my

account

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,account

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I am not opting for a 2

week

period.

Although

I am off to work for about a

week

, in order to compensate

that

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for that

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one

week

time

off, I would like to work extra hours daily. So that I can deliver the project assignments within the timeline. Alternatively, it would be great if you could provide any other options apart from spending extra hours. Yours faithfully, Meera Shareef

Fri May 01 2020

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
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7 paragraphs

188 words

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Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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