Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in city, while others believe that bicycles are better. Discuss both views and gives your opinions.

Well, in present generation everything is being done quickly and with heavy workload, everyone is busy and want to reach their destination as quickly as possible, in which case there have been more vehicles used and they feel it is more better, but some believe that cycling is better
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
using cars to navigate in the
city
. In
this
essay I would like to express my point of view and provide my uttermost opinion.
Firstly
, motor vehicles is widely used everywhere in the world now, it is one of the best and the quickest median of movement for long distance or short distance. One can ride in their comfort and stress free as they don't need to wait in line to get on a bus or walk down the road or even using any kind of physical power to trek to their destination. Modern vehicles has made human life very easy in many ways,
for instance
, one can navigate from work to home or any meeting very quick without any issue and stress free. Some uses even cars as for wealth show by buying expensive cars it is the kind of a hobby for some peoples.
Secondly
, where car's make life easy for us, there it
also harm
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also harms
has also harmed
is also harming
our environment, due to rise in vehicle usage they more carbon dioxide from cars are polluting our atmosphere. There I huge rise in the number of cars used at present
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than
the past, but with
then
time it is increasing
then
decreasing.
For instance
, if there are 5 members in the house every 5 of them own 1 car and some time even 2 cars per person which is unnecessary. I believe that in a family 1 or max 2 cars are more
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than
enough as it
also
help to bring the family together as they all will travel to gather
instead
of travelling alone in their each car. But
instead
if we purpose cycle to tour in
city
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the city
it will reduce the air pollution drastically and not only that many peoples are having obesity due to their work schedule and they have less physical activity. If they practice cycle within
city
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the city
a city
it will help in reducing traffic on roads as well as it will help our physical appearance.
For example
, study has shown that test conduct in Japan for fitness more
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than
95% are fit and healthy as they use bicycle to travel to work or walk which
also
reduce in different kind of diseases as
this
physical activity keep their body active and healthy. To summarize, Vehicle's has made it easy to track, but it is our responsibility to look after our environment. I wouldn't say we should completely stop using of cars in the
city
, but we should avoid using it whenever we can.

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