Now a day people using social media to keep in touch with other and we aware of the news do the advantage of this outcome the disadvantage

It is undoubtedly true that these days, the user of a social media have been inclining due to connection with the society and for knowing the knowledgeable information. In my opinion, the benefits of social media are appropriate
instead
of drawbacks.
First
and foremost, social media is beneficial for learning
health
's facts. To justify on social media has a lot of a website, which are
publishing
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published
hellsing
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Hellsing
facts for
health
improvement.
For example
, America government creative website, which have been provide
health
related information.
As a
result people
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result, people
overcome their
diseases
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disease
by following website techniques and
majority
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the majority
a majority
of people become aware
for
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of
their
health
.
Secondly
, it
increase
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increases
the connectivity of people with their relatives and friends. In the other
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words, in
this
,
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holistic
lifestyle people do not have time to go their relatives and
friends
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friends'
houses and communicate.
Instead
of
this
, they talk with each other on social media by video call and text messages On the other words, social media is
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disadvantaged
because of
this
addiction. To instance
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of
social media has a provide
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lots
of things, which are related to entertainment a knowledgeable things
,
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,
these are unlimited.
Therefore
, people consume a lot of time on
this
study conducted by Delhi University in 2018
show
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showed
that Indian
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spends
their 3 and 4 hours per day on social media. To conclude, it can
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commit
that social media is advantages for relationship and gaining
health
information. But
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also draws
also
draw
this advantages
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these advantages
this advantage
due to
this
addiction. In my opinion the benefits of
this
is outweighed as compared to
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
.
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