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Now a day people using social media to keep in touch with other and we aware of the news do the advantage of this outcome the disadvantage

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It is undoubtedly true that these days, the user of a social media have been inclining due to connection with the society and for knowing the knowledgeable information. In my opinion, the benefits of social media are appropriate
instead
 of drawbacks.
First
 and foremost, social media is beneficial for learning
health
's facts. To justify on social media has a lot of a website, which are
publishing
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published
hellsing
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Hellsing
 facts for
health
 improvement.
For example
, America government creative website, which have been provide
health
 related information.
As a
result people
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result, people
 overcome their
diseases
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disease
 by following website techniques and
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of people become aware
for
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of
 their
health
.
Secondly
, it
increase
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increases
 the connectivity of people with their relatives and friends. In the other
words in
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words, in
this
,
hastic
emphasizing the organic or functional relation between parts and the whole
holistic
 lifestyle people do not have time to go their relatives and
friends
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friends'
 houses and communicate.
Instead
 of
this
, they talk with each other on social media by video call and text messages On the other words, social media is
disadvantages
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disadvantaged
 because of
this
 addiction. To instance
on
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of
 social media has a provide
lot
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lots
 of things, which are related to entertainment a knowledgeable things
,
Accept space
,
 these are unlimited.
Therefore
, people consume a lot of time on
this
 study conducted by Delhi University in 2018
show
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showed
 that Indian
spend
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spends
 their 3 and 4 hours per day on social media. To conclude, it can
finally
committed
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commit
 that social media is advantages for relationship and gaining
health
 information. But
,
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,
this
is
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also draws
also
 draw
this advantages
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these advantages
this advantage
 due to
this
 addiction. In my opinion the benefits of
this
 is outweighed as compared to
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
.
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